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A poem on mourning a loved one

submitted by deleted to KatsPlace 3.6 yearsOct 28, 2021 22:57:42 ago (+46/-1)     (KatsPlace)

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[ - ] NuckFiggers 4 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 01:46:26 ago (+4/-0)

I wish I could use that at my funeral but my family would roll their eyes since all I did was fuck around on the computer

[ - ] SparklingWiggle 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 18:20:52 ago (+0/-0)

So get out and do something. If you’re not dead, it’s not too late.

[ - ] Formula350 3 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 09:30:31 ago (+3/-0)

This morning I am going to my cousins funeral. He worked for DARPA as a biological chemical engineer. He drank himself to death for the things he was doing. One or two fifths a day. He would never talk about his work, nor could he. Died at 44 alone in his apartment. Fucking a Dan, the money was never worth it. I will miss you. May you be free now.

[ - ] account deleted by user [op] 1 point 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 11:33:32 ago (+1/-0)

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[ - ] deleted 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 10:35:32 ago (+0/-0)

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[ - ] SparklingWiggle 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 18:27:19 ago (+0/-0)

When I see the name Dan, I think Dumb-ass nigger. So, I read that as “Fucking a dumb-ass nigger” and that would not only be a horrible way to go, but I wouldn’t have any sympathy for the oil driller.

But then I realized it should read “Fucking-A, Dan”

My condolences. It would be nice to know what he knew.

[ - ] ToNigIsToNog 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 20:25:22 ago (+0/-0)

I remember this joke.

[ - ] Formula350 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 31, 2021 13:54:59 ago (+0/-0)

I am comfortable not knowing. Many good men are fucked by people who take great deeds and twist them into evil. His drinking started about 4 years ago. That’s when I believe he found out what his work was actually being used for. Whatever it was.

[ - ] SparklingWiggle 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 31, 2021 21:54:21 ago (+0/-0)

I hope he rests in peace. May God show his mercy.

[ - ] calx 4 points 3.6 yearsOct 28, 2021 23:13:05 ago (+4/-0)

That is good stuff. Don't laugh this song reminded me of the poem. I don't like country music but this one brings a tear to me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ouZSLckCvgQ

[ - ] account deleted by user [op] 3 points 3.6 yearsOct 28, 2021 23:23:29 ago (+3/-0)

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[ - ] calx 1 point 3.6 yearsOct 28, 2021 23:28:14 ago (+1/-0)

The theme of reincarnation gets me. We're all just being recycled over and over again.

[ - ] deleted 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 13:28:15 ago (+0/-0)

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[ - ] MasterAce 1 point 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 00:06:48 ago (+1/-0)

doesn’t like country music
-Likes this song
- pick one

[ - ] calx 2 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 00:30:01 ago (+2/-0)

I love this song. Fuck off. :)

[ - ] MasterAce 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 10:44:30 ago (+0/-0)

Fine.

[ - ] carrotcar 2 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 00:51:13 ago (+2/-0)

Country/pop/rap is pretty much all the same now, due to kikes.

[ - ] MasterAce 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 10:44:07 ago (+0/-0)

Pop-is pretty much the same.
Outside of pop radio there are differences in genres.
But I’ll agree with cuz kikes.

[ - ] PeckerwoodPerry 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 30, 2021 14:14:55 ago (+0/-0)

This song fits too
https://youtu.be/wsQw2UPHdS0

[ - ] Nagasaki 3 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 01:02:02 ago (+4/-1)

This poem disbelieves in the soul. You will have experience after you're dead. You will not be "in nature". These statements explicitly deny the experience of the grave and resurrection.

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[ - ] SparklingWiggle 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 31, 2021 21:55:48 ago (+0/-0)

If we join the Father, it does not matter when, for time has no meaning to the Father.

[ - ] 9000timesempty 2 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 00:54:37 ago (+2/-0)

Gay. Mother fucker is dead but in denial.

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[ - ] AlexanderMorose13 1 point 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 00:37:42 ago (+1/-0)

I know that this is a fence protecting a gravesite, but I really feel the poem is kind of awkward when it's being hung from a barbed wire fence. The poem is great, don't get me wrong, but the context is important as well. I'd at least have it staked into the ground or something.

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[ - ] NationalSocialism 1 point 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 00:21:05 ago (+2/-1)

Beautiful poem.

[ - ] spasswerk 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 22:35:01 ago (+0/-0)

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[ - ] spasswerk 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 23:45:55 ago (+0/-0)

Pick a line not likely to be spoken, put it in quotes, duck duck go. Voila! I'd heard it before, probably when the movie stars were swooning over it some years ago.

[ - ] pickingrinninspittin 0 points 3.6 yearsOct 29, 2021 15:30:53 ago (+0/-0)

"I am not there. I did not die" Uh, someone want to break the news to ol'Elmer there?

Reminds me of the line from Spike Milligan's Puckoon describing the inscription on a tombstone: "Tom Conlon O'Rourke. Not Dead, just Sleeping."

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