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A poem by p.neri (© 2023)

submitted by paul_neri to PoetryForBrokenHearts 1.9 yearsJun 3, 2023 23:55:42 ago (+4/-5)     (PoetryForBrokenHearts)

"There's a part of me that hopes;

and a part of me that copes;

With the part of me that hopes".


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[ - ] Fascinus 6 points 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 00:07:06 ago (+6/-0)

...while I shop for ropes.

[ - ] paul_neri [op] 0 points 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 00:15:26 ago (+0/-0)

Yes I can see the connection (no pun). Sad though it is.

[ - ] TheOriginal1Icemonkey 1 point 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 01:05:38 ago (+1/-0)

While the rest of me does dopes.

[ - ] paul_neri [op] 1 point 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 01:09:12 ago (+1/-0)

I can see a raw talent there shining through the mud and the grit.

[ - ] Anus_Expander 1 point 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 07:08:01 ago (+1/-0)

Drop the cope, and embrace the rope.

[ - ] paul_neri [op] 0 points 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 07:11:34 ago (+0/-0)

I am impressed!

[ - ] boekanier 1 point 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 00:17:17 ago (+1/-0)*

man, neri, that's deep...I didn't know you had it in you

[ - ] paul_neri [op] 0 points 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 00:28:20 ago (+0/-0)

have you never had a broken heart, Herr boekanier, where Olga stopped sending you love letters by carrier pigeon from her village in Belgorod? There was a part of you that never gave up hope and yet...a part of you that poured water on your futile fantasy in order to keep you on the straight and narrow and not falling into loves abyss!

[ - ] paul_neri [op] 0 points 1.9 yearsJun 4, 2023 00:20:20 ago (+0/-0)

I know, I know but goats are deep thinkers.Seriously.