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submitted by we_kill_creativity to whatever 6 monthsOct 22, 2023 19:45:35 ago (+15/-0)     (www.youtube.com)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqOgyNfHl1U&ab_channel=UpgradeYourMindset



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[ - ] mxcviel 5 points 6 monthsOct 22, 2023 20:10:33 ago (+5/-0)

this Rudyard Kipling was all over everything :) Yeats was much more to the point
https://pic8.co/sh/Qe2XVq.png

but very nice poem.

[ - ] Spaceman84 2 points 6 monthsOct 22, 2023 20:54:43 ago (+2/-0)

That's an accurate assessment.

[ - ] Spaceman84 2 points 6 monthsOct 22, 2023 20:00:41 ago (+2/-0)

If if if if if if if if Okey doke

[ - ] Prairie 1 point 6 monthsOct 23, 2023 03:59:55 ago (+1/-0)

Maybe it's just me but a video with music and sappy presentation ruins a poem. The point of poetry (or any other written form) is to communicate the message with just those words. If - Rudyard Kipling

[ - ] Nosferatjew 1 point 6 monthsOct 23, 2023 04:16:58 ago (+1/-0)

The music is used to dictate to the audience how they are supposed to feel. It denies the them the opportunity to be sincerely impacted by the words they read/hear by clouding their mind with emotional noise. It is manipulative, it is programming. It creates and trains NPCs.

[ - ] Prairie 0 points 6 monthsOct 23, 2023 06:22:39 ago (+0/-0)

That's how I feel. They've created a complete mold and all I need to do is inject myself into it and I will come away with the exact same experience as the previous person who was molded.

[ - ] Smedleys_Butler 0 points 6 monthsOct 23, 2023 14:07:10 ago (+0/-0)

Was hoping this would be Kipling, was not disappointed

[ - ] Nosferatjew 0 points 6 monthsOct 23, 2023 04:21:36 ago (+0/-0)

Good poem, read by a man with a good voice. The music is gay though. Also, this is a poem about being a man, so, why are there shots of some insta travel thot looking at shit?

[ - ] 3Whuurs 0 points 6 monthsOct 23, 2023 02:21:04 ago (+0/-0)

[ - ] GrayDragon 0 points 6 monthsOct 23, 2023 00:23:48 ago (+0/-0)

That was pretty fantastic.