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By A Galloping Sea

submitted by prototype to poetry 4 monthsJan 29, 2025 02:45:17 ago (+5/-1)     (poetry)

By a galloping sea
I thought I could be free
I thought I could be free
Oh, by a galloping sea.

By a airy church
She said she'd find a perch
She said she'd find a perch
Oh, by an airy church.

By a noonday breeze
Her song is in the trees
Her song is in the trees
Oh, on a noonday breeze

Farewell farewell the breeze
The church, the bell, and song
Her last farewell to me
A song at sea, crest and swell,
A song at sea to remember thee
Tis remembered well.
By a galloping sea.

By a galloping sea
a hawk eye could spy
the cold spray of ocean waves
the crash and crest of foam
beyond an unending dome.
where seabirds song reached forever
like an unending cry.
fading, rising, among the warfs
with the steady tides.


6 comments block


[ - ] paul_neri 1 point 4 monthsJan 29, 2025 02:49:12 ago (+1/-0)

A tad depressing imo as in ...desolate.

[ - ] prototype [op] 1 point 4 monthsJan 29, 2025 02:59:03 ago (+1/-0)

I have less depressing ones.

'less' being the operative word.

Gonna post a few a day, somewhere between 1-3

[ - ] paul_neri 0 points 4 monthsJan 29, 2025 03:21:52 ago (+0/-0)

and are you going to post the authors?

[ - ] prototype [op] 0 points 4 monthsJan 29, 2025 03:23:42 ago (+0/-0)

and are you going to post the authors?

Written by myself.

[ - ] paul_neri 1 point 4 monthsJan 29, 2025 03:27:03 ago (+1/-0)

If true, impressive.

[ - ] prototype [op] 1 point 4 monthsJan 29, 2025 03:49:07 ago (+1/-0)

If true, impressive.

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Breaks up the monotony.