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I wrote a poem

submitted by anthonylancer to whatever 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 10:26:50 ago (+9/-0)     (whatever)

happy superbowl
you can burn the coal
and not pay a toll
please do what ur told
a soul can be sold
for a lot of gold
dancing on a pole
quickly growing old
heart becoming cold
bluffing then you fold
find out that they stole
all the things we hold dear
drowning us in fear
the agenda's clear
say too much and disappear
none will shed a tear
they might even cheer
cattle that they steer
moment drawing near
best protect ur rear
join likeminded peers
find a new career
maybe brewing beer
or distilling spirits
shout the truth or they wont hear it
web history, clear it
dangerous truth dont get near it
democracy a mere trick
just to make you sick
cooped up like a chick
co-opt any movement
torture for amusement
follow ancient blueprint
was jogging now a full sprint
speeding towards enslavement
harder now to pay rent, and to stay fit
im in amazement
it doesn't make sense
howd they convince
willing guinea pigs
in an experiment on our bodies
but they want the soul
gain total control
diligent patrol
girlfriend is a mole
traitors in our midst
compiling long lists
time to raise our fists
lest cease to exist
fade into the mist


18 comments block


[ - ] dalai_llama 5 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 10:35:09 ago (+5/-0)

10/10. I award you the Pull It's Her Prize in poetry

[ - ] anthonylancer [op] 3 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 10:46:44 ago (+3/-0)

thank you!

[ - ] con77 3 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 11:42:59 ago (+3/-0)

if you get a chance check out my haikus

[ - ] anthonylancer [op] 0 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 12:08:05 ago (+0/-0)

please do send a link

[ - ] con77 1 point 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 12:10:10 ago (+1/-0)

its here on upgoat. click on Basedhaikus

[ - ] Deplorablepoetry 0 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 12:34:06 ago (+1/-1)

Biker dressed in drag

Delicate desperado

Faggot on two wheels

^ this one’s for you fucker! NOW GET THE FUCK OUT OF THE LEFT LANE!!

[ - ] con77 2 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 13:02:10 ago (+2/-0)

I'm getting that on a t shirt 👕!

[ - ] con77 2 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 13:03:58 ago (+2/-0)

I carry a gun

I have for 40 years now

Fuck around find out

[ - ] Deplorablepoetry 1 point 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 13:11:33 ago (+1/-0)

Rode kill

[ - ] kammmmak 1 point 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 14:28:35 ago (+1/-0)

ride to kill

[ - ] Deplorablepoetry 3 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 12:11:39 ago (+3/-0)

Looks like rap to me

Poetry denotes emotion within the reader

Nigger

I will upgoat your submission simply for your attempt

Don’t get hell bent about it

Try not to cry out loud.

Just understand you fucking retarded sack of stupid

Something something die

nigger

[ - ] con77 2 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 13:05:06 ago (+2/-0)

Jealous much?

[ - ] Deplorablepoetry 0 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 13:10:52 ago (+0/-0)

Two wheeled glorified tractor made in China that gimps parade in?

Ya okay.

Get a real ride retard

[ - ] Deplorablepoetry 0 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 13:12:00 ago (+0/-0)

Two wheeled glorified tractor made in China that gimps parade in?

Ya okay.

Get a real ride retard

[ - ] kammmmak 1 point 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 14:27:19 ago (+1/-0)

User name checks out

[ - ] con77 2 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 11:42:14 ago (+2/-0)

thats actually very good. well done

[ - ] anthonylancer [op] 2 points 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 12:07:39 ago (+2/-0)

thank you

[ - ] CaptainMongo 1 point 2 monthsFeb 12, 2025 13:44:02 ago (+1/-0)

Perfect Prose For A Heavy Metal Rock Opera...